| "At the Edge of the Lake" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: ch3
Reviewed By: 50cent [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:40 CST
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so, Uo was leading the charge in chapter 3. I guess that is a way to have sex if your own of the sohma's. Just be a little dominatrix I guess... lol.
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 23:49 CST
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hai! u updated!!! hurry and cont...pls!!!
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:41 CST
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i personally think your writing is fine. and the longer the chapters, the better they are, in my opinion. you get more information in them, and it makes your readers happy that you don't leave off on a cliffy! but, yeah, i don't mean to be demanding or anything, but, uhm, hurry up with the next chapter...please? hmmm....kisa and yuki....now there's an interesting one...oh, and i did kind of wonder what ever happened to kyo and uo....
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:25 CST
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This is great! I think the scene was just fine!
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 16:51 CST
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Horray! you're continuing! loved it. the ooc-ness is fine. if tohru were acting like she always did in this story, i think i'd go crazy. so, yeah, i'm waiting for your next chapter! Shi
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Title: #6
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:51 CST
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Now Aya and Gure? AAAA! I'm in heaven! Best story i've read so far!!!^o^
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Title: #5
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:14 CST
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Again, Shigure and Hatori? Yumm!!!
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Title: #4
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:11 CST
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Saki and Aya? ooo! That's a first I've seen!
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Title: #3
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:06 CST
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~We've been on the road for 2 hours Kyo! Where the HELL are we? Gimme that damn map!" Uo snatched the map and looked at what Shigure had drawn for them and gasped. She remembered telling Kyo she didn't care what kind of map it was but this was CRAP! The map had been drawn in crayon and 2 small figures had been drawn at the bottom riding a 2 seated bicycle. "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!!!" She screamed.~ That's my fav part!
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Title: #2
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:04 CST
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Who can ask for anything better than being with Gure and Hari? *drooool!*
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Title: #1
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 16:55 CST
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Tee hee. this is so funny! I was wondering how Kyo would ride with Uo, but he managed it ~_^. Well, onto to ch.2!
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