"Forgiving Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: rhiara On: March 30, 2005 07:49 CST Comment/Review: ummmm just found this, enjoying it so far. Some of your grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired, but it flows and reads well. Interesting concept...InuYasha is a baka, as always...But I think Kagome is being a bit too childish and naive...It just doesn't seem her. Anywho, I like it, write more.
| Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 19:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good story idea and as the previous reviewer said, it is very original. I can't wait for the next chapter ^__^
| Reviewed By: itsjustme On: November 21, 2004 15:02 CST Comment/Review: Wow. This is a very original story. I can't wait to read more of it. And darn you for leaving it where you did. I'm very curious as to what is going to happen. Please continue soon!
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