| "A Notebook" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Tha blind one On: November 21, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one to, but i think you should have killed the ladybug
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Reviewed By: Kayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really like this story. It describes what some people don't realize. We, humans, will probably not realize that we need the environment until it's gone. Oh and one of my favorite quotes from someone. "We must be the voice for things without one." All plants have feelings. Every blade of grass is unique. However we don't think of what plants feel. I believe that plants can also feel pain. Why am I writing this? Oh right I was reviewing your story and got carried away in my own thoughts. Sorry. Anyways, this is a very good story I really like it. ^_^ FACE -Kayoko
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Reviewed By: Tha blind one On: November 19, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much better than the bug one, i liked this one, write more i will do something.......
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: icia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was fantastic!! i was entertained and it was definitely a style i've never read before. it was also a bit humerous, especially the mosquito bit. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Somecrazywhiteboy On: November 18, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good, even though i felt bad for the bug, ok not really.
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Reviewed By: Snape On: November 18, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The shot they gave you be to sedate you Mabey the global warming comes from the detiration of the soil and stuff under it. You don't like things sucking the blood from your body? Poor lestat! Overall it was interesting (it makes my brain hurt to think)
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