| "Inu-Ra-Ken: Affections Touching Across Sense" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a little silly, but I kind of like it so far. I would like to correct some of your Japanese, though: "gomen nasai", not "cominise"; also, Kenshin's odd verbal inflection is "de gozaru yo, or de gozaru ka" as the case dictates. Its a suffix affirmative which loosely translates to "that it is, that I am, that you are" and is spoken only at the end of a clause
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Reviewed By: SironaMorpher On: April 14, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!You've got to update it!Every thing you've done is great.Even if it's not your best work,it is EXCELLENT^_^.Good luck with the rest of the story!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angel: OMG! I AM SO INTERESTED INTO THIS STORY!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!! THIS IS SO FUNNY i almost fell out of my chair! You have got to continue! YOU MUST! Demon: Ok, calm down my Shojo fiend... Angel: *takes deep breath* Tranquility...balance...selflessness... Demon: Ok you heard my dear Shojo guzzler. Hurry up with that next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 (not logged in) On: November 19, 2004 13:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i luv it youre a very good writer, update soon. and thanks for your reveiw.
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