| "Too Much Birthday" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: deliriousvampire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2009 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was...epic. hahaha. that was the first one to make me laugh and had me almost fall out of my seat at the end. the pairings were...interesting. but that made it all the better. lol excellent work. =]
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was ... unique. What the hell was in those drinks???? Loved it even so *blushes like crazy*
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 09:43 CST
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Damn lol, I don't know whether to laugh, fall dead from shock, or what! So I'll just say damn good smut and I wonder if my next birthday party can be something like that! Mostly with me watching lol.
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Reviewed By: InnocentAnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this was not only the most fun-fulled Hentai i've ever read, it was the only one that made me laugh along the way, the pairings were very unique. who'd a thought the monkey was going to get some? i really enjoyed it, it's not like all the other ones, i am one happy camper now. thank you for making my day ^_^
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Title: I suppose liquor is quicker...
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Didn't want Tooru's first to be... him... but I'll forgive you because of the brilliant way you wrote Hanajima's experience. Odd that you had some condom use but not for everyone? Chapter length was nice, like little omakes, almost. This almost begs for a continuation, aftermath fic; I'll check your stories roster to see if you've decided to go that route. Ja ne. W. p.s. some of your middle chapters seem to have punctuation corruption, just to let you know.
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Title: Too Much Birthday
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an odd ending...it was perfect. This was one of the few lemons that actually interested my friend so...excellent job and keep up the excellent work!! ^-^ lol. Hope to read more of your work. Ja!!
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Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahahahaha, that was soooo good. i love the ending, "too much birthday cake", oh that was good. - wipes away imaginary tears - fan-fucking-tabulous. thanks for a great fic.
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Reviewed By: ElfMousey On: April 26, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic! It was a bit long, maybe you should make the chapters longer, but besides that I enjoyed it for the most part. I got lost in the story a little bit, but then it became clear in the end! Good Job!!
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Title: Lemony goodness!
Reviewed By: LunaNuri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs and collapses in utter joyness* this was by far the most enjoyable hentai i have erver read and quite frankly i have thought about this for quite some time *snickers* but anyhow job well done!*joy-gasms*
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Reviewed By: Mistic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually read Fruits Basket nor read hentai filled writings that don't really contain a plot however I like yours for the most part and I think you should write a continueation like maybe the girls get pregnate or something. All in all it was pretty good.Anyways continue writing. Bye!
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Reviewed By: lee lee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was funny and good!
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