| "Her Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: i'm speechless..
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only thing i can say about this story is....... INTENSE. Sakura is crazy but she has a reason right?Not a very good one but at least it made sense!(i think) She killed Kakashi fast though.I wasn't that surprised though. NICE JOB!!
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Reviewed By: V-townlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is wow!
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Reviewed By: Shariku Onikage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i was first going to read and review this, i was going to suggest changing it to humour/horror. I could not imagine Sakura snapping and it not being funny. Thanks for proving me wrong. The large spacing between the paragraphs really adds to effect and Sasuke breaking down and finally losing control was superbly done. The only thing i was against was Kakashi raping Sakura idea. It's the only thing that doesn't really fit. I understand you needed a reason for her to hate him as well, but something like not training or not focusing on her would have worked much better. Still, great story overall
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Reviewed By: Shariku Onikage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i was first going to read and review this, i was going to suggest changing it to humour/horror. I could not imagine Sakura snapping and it not being funny. Thanks for proving me wrong. The large spacing between the paragraphs really adds to effect and Sasuke breaking down and finally losing control was superbly done. The only thing i was against was Kakashi raping Sakura idea. It's the only thing that doesn't really fit. I understand you needed a reason for her to hate him as well, but something like not training or not focusing on her would have worked much better. Still, great story overall
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Reviewed By: Shariku Onikage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i was first going to read and review this, i was going to suggest changing it to humour/horror. I could not imagine Sakura snapping and it not being funny. Thanks for proving me wrong. The large spacing between the paragraphs really adds to effect and Sasuke breaking down and finally losing control was superbly done. The only thing i was against was Kakashi raping Sakura idea. It's the only thing that doesn't really fit. I understand you needed a reason for her to hate him as well, but something like not training or not focusing on her would have worked much better. Still, great story overall
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Reviewed By: Shariku Onikage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i was first going to read and review this, i was going to suggest changing it to humour/horror. I could not imagine Sakura snapping and it not being funny. Thanks for proving me wrong. The large spacing between the paragraphs really adds to effect and Sasuke breaking down and finally losing control was superbly done. The only thing i was against was Kakashi raping Sakura idea. It's the only thing that doesn't really fit. I understand you needed a reason for her to hate him as well, but something like not training or not focusing on her would have worked much better. Still, great story overall
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