| "Big Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: This is a bad fic.
Reviewed By: littleredhat On: December 14, 2005 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only got halfway through the first paragraph. I'm sorry but I hate being slammed with so many unexplained and OOC events. And lets face it your plot has been done so many times it makes my head hurt. But it was the total train reck of the paceing that made me give up. Kagome's character didn't grow or change it mutated! And then you throw this undevolped original charater at me and expect me to accept her implausible existice. I'm sure alot of 14 year old girls will like it but in the opinion of this veteran fanfic reader, Its not good. I didn't like it. I'm not insulting you personally. This is not a flame. Its just a bad review for a bad fic.
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Reviewed By: inugirl55 On: November 09, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic!!!!!!! write more please!!!!!!!! if possible put lovey dovey stuff for inu and kag
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the story is great but I am a little confused as to how Kagome became a hanyou.
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Title: Big Changes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: sweet!!!!
Reviewed By: jjojodoll On: September 01, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story love the way you set the plot please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: moon_silver_9008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 22:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, all ppls. I hope you like my chapters and I'm happy that you are reading them, but I'd really like it if you give me more reveiws, the reviews is what the authors want and me too. Thank you again.
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Reviewed By: morbid angel On: June 14, 2005 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I cant wait for the next chapter. is the poem form chapter 6 a song? cause if it isent do you mind if I use it? I really wanna work on a new song but I am a bad wrighter so I usualy just wright the musice that goes with the words. e mail me and tell me if it is ok maui_sarah@hotmail.com , thank you
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: moon_silver_9008 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 10:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry people but I've just finished typing 3 more chapters! So you'll get them soon I promise.
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Title: please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: jojo_sweet On: May 23, 2005 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on hurry it is soo good please finnish i really like this one its probly the only one i like so come on. ps. you have one of the best storys i have ever readed os please hurry.
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Title: hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: jodi On: February 03, 2005 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
get off your ass and finnish this fic its really good so chop chop ps. you should go into the writing bize
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Reviewed By: beccapatty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 03:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good chapter! i like ur story alot soo far. Kagome sounds cool looking! hehe with inu ears and red hair and eyes.. kinda freaky but cool! :) cant wait till ya update! Im a bit confused about the whole Kikyo telling Kagomes friend (which is apparanetly her daughter ) to pretend Inuyasha is the dad.. lol n e ways keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: u_b_san On: November 21, 2004 01:04 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HECK IS THIS STORY! I WANNA READ MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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