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Reviewed By: LunaYami On: January 21, 2005 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really like this fic, please keep writing. You have nice style to your work.
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Reviewed By: porymon On: January 15, 2005 20:03 CST
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tera is being a bit of a bitch, no wunder she wakes up to find that her first(and still one she has feelings) love is with raven, o ya i can remeber how much those two girls got along well, loving it. ps i wrote this reveiw a few seconds after the last one just forgot to put this is in
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Reviewed By: porymon On: January 15, 2005 20:00 CST
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raven pregnet o my god, cool i wunder a green telepath that can change into any animal maybey or somthing else entirely, dum dum dum daaa! who knows. really great story can't wait for the rest. P.S.:alright beast boy, raven should have said that he looked SOOO, sexy in boxers though lol
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: porymon On: January 15, 2005 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is asome by the best i've read yet on this site. I gave you a nine for creativity because i fealt that you should have put more dialoge and discriptions. For example you should have a bigger scene for the hive members as they came in like "can't belive i'm back in barf central and i can't steal any thing"gizmo snorted. Mamothed looked down at the little gut in the green suit and did'nt really care a whole lot."hey weres the fridge any how? i can't remember since the last time a raided it" Jinx smacked both boys on the heads. "ouch!, cut it out jinx!" you behave know gizmo. Gizmo shuted up for fear of bad luck. That goes for you to Mamoth! "Fine.. hey a game.." with utter disgust for her comerades jinx grabs cyborgs arm. "one as smart as racks and the other is a snot nosed brat, well none's perfect, exept you Cyborgy" "heh he he..." at those words Cyborg blushed. and maybey when Beastboy sat on the bed with Raven and took of his shirt she could thought (haw geez ther is his but right in front of me, I just want to squeez it and he taking of his shirt, o my god!)"alright with you?" Raven just nodde and turned around. (thank god he's not taking of his pants!.. although.. eek what am i thinking!) "g'night raven" Beast boy yawned and whent to sleep. as raven doesed of she thought to herself only 15 more minutes.. mmm..) just an idea if you could this kinda stuff into account thats all and antisapate your next chapters.
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Reviewed By: anynomous On: January 12, 2005 08:00 CST
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I saw your summery and had to comment. I used to read the original Teen Titan comics and wondered if you knew how wrong it is for Beast Boy to have parents. Beast Boy (or Changeling as he's sometimes called) is an orphen. His parents were scientists studying disease is relation to animals in africa (I think). Garfield Logan (his real name) only survived because his parents zapped him with a raygun machine which was part of their research. He recovered but also turned green (he was blond, blue eyes, 5 yrs old.) They didn't discover his powers until he changed into a mongoose to kill a snake which threatened his mother. His parents died when their boat went over a cliff. Beast Boy would have died too but changed into a bird and flew away. He said 'I could have saved them, but I was just a stupid little kid.' He was adopted by a superhero couple (who shortly after died) leaving him rich, living in a mansion with a butler as a guardian (I know it sounds like Batman.) I'm very disappointed how far off from the comics the cartoon veered. PS... Terra was a pychotic traitor who died accidently while trying to kill the Titans for Slade (she was sleeping with him...I'm not kidding.) and crushed herself under her own rocks in her fury to destroy them. Why she hated them? Not explained...they thought she was nuts. They covered it up but declaring her a hero who died in action. Beast Boy was heartbroken. Slade was captured when Terra died by surrendering to a new Titan...his son.
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Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 21:48 CST
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Your doing a great job with this. I'll be waiting for the next update.
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Title: WOOP
Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:33 CST
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Keep thous updates coming. WOOP, very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: turtle_youkai_333 On: December 11, 2004 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. that was the best fanfiction that had raven and beast boy together that i have read yet.i am still in awe. please hurry and update soon. :D
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Title: You really should add more.
Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really should add more to this even now it's one of the greatest Teen Titan Fanfics on here but it doesn't have a ending.
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Reviewed By: raccoons_rock_my_world [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 00:02 CST
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you can never update to soon, which is what you should do
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Reviewed By: Resse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this wa one of the bobest stories ive read so far. i love Raven and Beastboy.cant weait for tha updation! Holla!
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Reviewed By: maya natsume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 20:47 CST
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this is a great fic!!!, i love bb and raven fanfics, not alot of them, but still like them, please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is a great fic
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!!!!!! THIS FIC IS AMAZING!!!!!! I THOUGHT IT WOULD B GOOD AT FIRST BUT NOW ITS LIKE 1 OF MY FAVS!!!!!!!!! THERE R BARLY N E RAVEN/ BEASTBOY FICS THAT I LIKE CUZ THERES ALWAYS TERRA!!! I HATE TERRA !!!!!!! SHES A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANTED 2 KILL HER SCINCE SHE FIRST SHOWED UP!!!!!!!! ^_^ i liked the figh bb had with his "parents" & he cares 4 ravn alot!!!!!!!! wut will happene next !!!!!!!!!?????? i cant wait!!!!!! pluse u update fast like 2 chapers n like 2 days or sumtin!!!!!!!! its awsome u need 2 write more!!!!!!!!! ive got this fic on my favs!!!!!!!! also thankx again 4 that music u wrote that gave me the idea 4 my play!!!!!!!!!! thankx!!!!!! now allz i gotta do is do the dancing.... n e wayzzzzzzz awsome fic write more & more & more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wut kind of clothes did raven have 2 pack...??? OH IS THER GONNA B DANGER & LOTS OF ACTION N THE NEXT 1? I NEED 2 KNOW!!!!!!!! WUT WILL BBS PARENTS DO???!!!! WILL THEY TRY N STOP THEM...???? WUT WILL HAPEN???!!!! DUDE I NEED 2 KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!N SKOOL ALLZ I WANTED 2 DO WUZ COME HOME N READ THE NEW CHAPTER!!!! WELL THAT & KICK SUM BOIZ BUTT 4 CALLING ME A BITCH BUT I GOT HIM GOOD BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA SRY EVIL LAUGH IS LIKE A THING I DO ALOT ^_^|| N E WAYZZZZZZZZZZ GREAT FIC LUV IT UPDATE IT SOON!!!!!!! G2G PRACTICE MY HIP-HOP DANCE!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!! ^_^v
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Title: AWSOMES BB & REAVEN FIC EVER!!!!
Reviewed By: charlene On: November 30, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!!!!!!!! that is sooooooo kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!! beastboi & raven kissed!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wuz like yay!!!!!!!! n then wen that big shoker at the end!!! i hate cliffies!!!!!! pweeeeeezzzzz update update update update update!!!!!!!!!! pleeeeeeezzzzzzzz!!!!!! that song u used when bb & raven were dancing that gave me an idea & i might use that song 4 my play me n my friends r writing 4 skool!!!!!! ^_^ maby itll b a romance scean!!!!! kawaii!!!!!!!! dude this fic is awsome!!!!!! update!!!!!!! well i gotta go i need 2 creat posters on old british times n shiz & then get with sum friends & coreagraph our dance moves!!!! were doing sumting on history but pimping it up!!!!!!! like moves liek on the movie "u got served" n e wayzzzzz......... THIS FIC ROCKX!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE MORE MORE REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ CRAP I 4GOT MY MATH BOOK!!!!!! oh well i feel better thinking of this fic n e ways i suck at math ^_^v ja ne dude p.s: UPDATE OR DIE!!!!!!! U DONT HAVE A CHOICE!!!!!!!! unless the choice is pentubutter i like penutbutter ^_^ UPDATE ^_^v ja ne
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Title: AWSOME FIC!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS FIC IS SO KOOL!!!!!!!! DUDE I LUV RAVEN & BEASTBOI!!!!!!!! there so kawaii!!!!!!!!! U NEED 2 WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! IF U DONT ILL B MAJORLY PISSED IF U DONT UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! BEASTBOI WUZ SOOOOOOO KAWAII WHEN HE WENT 2 TALK 2 RAVEN!!!!!!!! EVERY1 THAT READS THIS REVIEW U HAVE 2 READ THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS MIGHT B MY FAV IF U KEEP UPDATING IT!!!!!!! I NEVER ACUTALLY THOUGHT OF BB's PARENTS TILL NOW!!!!! DUDE U HAVE 2 UPDATE OR SUFFER MY WRATH!!!!! & will raven whear new outfits on the trip!!??? dude this is like the tottaly awsomest tt fic ive ever read well this & jessicas fics UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE DUDE U NEED 2 UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! T_T I WANNA READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! DO LIKE IF U UPDATE ILL REVIEW!!!!!!! ALSO ILL GET MY FRIENDS 2 READ IT!!!!
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