| "Repay You" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: WTF!!!
Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I read your story again because I wanted to and there was nothing anyone could do about it! Anyways, thank you for reviewing 'My Last Breath'. Anyways, actually I wanted to know if you were eva gonna make that one story you said you were gonna write?!?! Its driving me crazy and I wanna read!! lol. So I'm gonna go read this story again! ^_~
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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was lovely. Nicely written and far more in-character than the actual story arc has been.
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Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 14:50 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Awww... so sweet! (O_O) eww did I just say that? Oh well. It was still good Good job
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Reviewed By: Karli On: November 21, 2004 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey chicklit its really good i like it. ur a good writer keep up the good work an keep on writein ^^
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Title: This was so sweet
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet. I like how you emphasized the fact that Yugi is the one who guides Yami, taking him back when he's done wrong,(or didn't think about what could have happened lol) like when he attacked Kaiba that one time. Oh and this was just too Kawaii.
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