| "Mother Dearest" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that story made me cry. Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: April 25, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow im gonna cry. that was really good.
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Title: ii lovies it!
Reviewed By: DG32173 *lazy* On: November 22, 2004 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i understood it. the kuwabara part was where shiori waved goodbye to the world, before going to be judged. i'm glad i understood that. it made it a whole lot easier. I believe that all mothers have to confirm for their children and their friends that they are really dead, sometimes, they have to do it for themselves too. i'm glade that you wrote this story! how old was shiori when she died in the story? that'd be interesting to know. please e-mail me the age at smccray@hanginout.zzn.com so i can know. well, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: shadowdove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow....that was really good! I really liked how you used Kurama's POV to tell the story! I didn't really understand the part with Kuwabara though...but I really enjoyed reading it none-the-less!! Keep up the good work!
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