| "Smoke in Your Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this 2-part story (or whatever you want to call it...) A LOT!!!! :D You write good lemons, i've never read anything quite like them, and I. LOVE. YOUR. GRAMMAR. I can ignore common mistakes but when they're in like every other sentence...ya, so i'm glad you DON'T because like I said, I love this story (-ies?)SO ANYWAY...Thank you so much for the wonderrful story. (wow...this is the longest review I've ever written...take it as a compliment!)
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Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 01:42 CST
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*teary eyed* you are a master...oh lord...this is hot...u think being a priest daughter its wrong to read this? dono don care right now cus it rocks.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:17 CST
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Someone on AFF.net has paid you the dubious compliment of plagiarizing your story. http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=544171137 You are a wonderful writer and I enjoy your stories too much to let this person get away with her theft. I hope you, as the real author, can have her removed from AFF completely. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Cyperian On: December 11, 2004 14:32 CST
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Hi. I enjoyed the fic, but that's not why I'm writing... Unless you go by another pen name (and for some reason saw fit to change the title and remove the author's notes from your story) someone has stolen this fic. http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=544172219 Please e-mail me if this is a false alarm. webmistress@moonlitrose.com. Sorry to bother you if it is. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story first, ended up with enough questions to go back and read Ghosts and returned to this one. Really can't say which one I like better. They are both excellent and both obviously come off of a clearly realized vision of how you would like the series to end. And not a typo in sight! Wish I had your patience for editing; my stories end up getting slapped online very nearly the moment they're done, typos and all. One very gentle and plaintive complaint. I agree that the jacket Inuyasha wears could be termed a karigimi, but it is not. The entire outfit is a suikan-no-hakama worn over a white kosode. Kosodes were merely the regulation base garment worn by men and women alike at the time. The length of the kosode varied. A bit poignant really; Inuyasha dressed as a prince as a child, a child as a teenager and finally, as a barefoot beggar as he took up life again. Kagome isn't the only one who's time was out of joint. Very good stuff! And I think lemons belong where and when it seems appropriate! Nokomarie the Snake nokomarie3@aol.com
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Title: this was a great sequel
Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iloved the frist one and I love this sequel!! good luck with writing other stories!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 12:39 CST
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I love it! It follows Ghosts in the Snow perfectly. I'd love to see another sequel. It's not PWP because you built up to this scene in Ghosts, so don't apologize. Anyway, it's wonderful and I hope to read more! Thanks!
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