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| "The Wild Stallion and the Drow" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: "... Otherwise known as the gray wizard, that damned fool, and other less flattering terms."
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! This is teh awesomest fic ever! You really know your Ranma 1/2 and your D&D. Oh, if you're into D&D spoofs and such, you should check out the D&D clip at Cybermoon Studios. It's really funny. But back to the story. This is really well written, and I can't WAIT for more! Please, keep this up! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters. And I see you had some fun adding nautical references. Nice work
| Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool. This is very well done. I am a player of D&D and have been since I was nine. I think you might have made a mistake in your fic concerning the identity of the Platinum Dragon though. Under 3rd edition setting Bahamut is the Platinum Dragon. He is the diety of metalic dragons, with domain spheres for clerics being Law, Good, and Dragon.
| Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for more.
| Title: Some comments in broken english...
Reviewed By: FenrIX_666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First - that's great. To mix ranmaverse and DnD universe - it's something new to me. Well, actuall y in our games i alweys chooses drow subrace, that worships Eillistraee... so it was VERY enjoyable reading. Second - Where is Dwarfs? Why they are skipping such divine-sized drinking party? And how about some craziness by Drunken Archmages in little Japan? (Of course, that involves Ranma and Eillistraee). Second (2HyperMan): Drow - is fallen evil (mostly) elves, that lives deeep under surface, in underdark. They have dark ebon skin and silverish-white hair. Those Elves lives in strong matriarhal society, that worships Lloth (or Lolth, depends on edition), the Spider Queen. They have some unique abilities (such as Dark Vision, Levitation, Fiery Fires etc), and fears sunlight.
| Title: Johnny Freakin Outer!!!! I'm the only one who's reviewed?
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just fucked up! You should have more reviews than this, although I'm proud to be the first to review, you deserve better! You deserve and hundred nae, a thousand reviews!!!! This is obviously a very well written and thought out story. I've always been a big fan of fantasy myself, but I do have a couple of questions though. One: What is the difference between a Drow and an Elf? (Don't get mad, I always thought Drow was another way of saying Elf.) Two: When you said Sea of the Fallen Star, was that in reference to the game Pirates of the Fallen Star? Three: Will Ryoga show up and challenge Ranma again and will he ever bury the hatchet? Four: Will the Nekoken come into play in the near future? Five: Will Hanali and Hiroshi get together and what about Daisuke? Well, that's all my questions, update soon and Keep up the great work!!!
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