| "Amon's Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Necco On: January 12, 2007 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
(sorry for the spelling mistakes.)
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Reviewed By: Necco On: January 12, 2007 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a lovely story, but Amon was way out of character. I understand his obbsession, but you didnt quit get the feel of his character. it would be nice if you would use "" for when they speak, seeing as it can get slightly chaotic. so aside for all that, I loved it. Please keep writing.
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Title: Amon's Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters please? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: princessgothika On: April 21, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Touche. This is a great story.
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Title: Amon's Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters. Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Title: Amon's Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Amon's Lust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn you should be paid for this! There not enough good lemon b/t Amon and Robin. I liked it.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story it was great.
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