| "Shadow's of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Boone & Ni On: March 02, 2005 20:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Boone: Hey, now that she ain't lookin, I like em both! Niala: **standing behind Boone, clears throat** Boone: damn.. busted! gotta run, great work!! **runs off**
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Title: **shrugs**
Reviewed By: Dark Myst On: February 17, 2005 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
{Niala}: Well, ya asked which one Ah like better... So far it's A tahe.. Ah like em both!! {Mystic}: I agree, both versions are great, full of suspence and action.. course I think the other version'll have a darker undertone. Which is equally awsome!!
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Title: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2265319/1/
Reviewed By: Kaido On: February 17, 2005 13:31 CST
Comment/Review:
the above link is the rewrite of this story, so if you enjoyed this go read that. even if you didn't like this, go read that one and tell me what you think. it's more violent than this one, and Phantom doesn't exist.
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Reviewed By: Venny On: February 16, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, A Mary Sue that I don`t want to kill. That`s quite rare.I want in his underwear draw. No I just want is underwear. Really me bigest problem is I can`t tell who is saying what. You`ve made Logan to happy for my liking but, I can forgive you. I in joy your story and I will continue to read it. Till you update I`ll be trying to get into Logans and Remys underware draw.
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Title: .................
Reviewed By: Dark Myst ~Niala~ On: February 02, 2005 00:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, Jus wanted to say hi and let ya know Ah read this chaptah... Ah can't wait for the next one! See ya latah Aiyen
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Title: one of the many reasons i hate this website...
Reviewed By: Aiyen Lebeau [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 07:58 CST
Comment/Review:
anytime i review my own story, it's because there's some dumb shit going on and i'm just pissed at the site because of it.
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Title: Hiya Aiyen
Reviewed By: Mystic S Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 05:37 CST
Comment/Review:
You're startin to heat things up a bit ain't ya? keep it up!
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Title: **smirks**
Reviewed By: Dark Myst ~Niala~ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 07:14 CST
Comment/Review:
AH'M SAVED!!! oh, good work on the Phantom bit... How come Ah'm the only one reviewin this thing anyway?
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Title: **laughs**
Reviewed By: Niala On: December 02, 2004 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, cool story... Wish I could heal like that. Anyway, I like it, it's startin to get real funny... just slap a few more people around!!!
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Title: awsome start!!
Reviewed By: Niala On: November 24, 2004 04:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, that was adventurous! anything that starts with that much action can only get better.... I did so LOVE Logan getting beat up as well **laughs hystericaly**
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