| "By the Book" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 00:08 CDT
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Dear gods I love Farf. Write quickly or I will hex you to the point you can do nothing but obsess over writing this story.
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Reviewed By: Pooka Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, I just liked this story. Then, you put in Farfello with a coloring book. Now I love this story. Damn you Farfello and your adorably insane ways . . . I love the characterizations you have for Farfello and Nagi. Farfello doesn't seem to be just the drooling pet of Schwartz. There are many scenes in this story that I love. Especially the coloring book part, Nagi running away from his schoolmates, and the big hug-hug between the rest of Weiss. Ah, the goodness that this be. Every now and then, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors but none too heavy to deter me from reading your fanfic. I can't wait to see the rest! -Veronica
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Reviewed By: basketcases02 On: December 02, 2004 07:30 CST
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I really liked this chapter. You did a good job with the Ken and Farfarello interaction.
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Reviewed By: Seilens On: December 01, 2004 16:14 CST
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Farfarello, or Gabriel if you wish, put in a great appearance. Keep it up. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Seilens On: December 01, 2004 15:43 CST
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I really liked this chapter. You're beginning to get into everyone's heads. I like that.
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Reviewed By: Seilens On: December 01, 2004 15:21 CST
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I think that this is a very exciting start. Must keep reading!
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Reviewed By: arrianni On: November 30, 2004 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style makes the reader sympathize with the characters... all of them .(yes, even Schu). Looking forward to the rest. ^_^ **Poor Ken....baaaad Schu (he needs a spanking)**
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Reviewed By: basketcases02 On: November 30, 2004 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am interested in your story please keep writing. I like the Ken and Schuldig plot but I would also like to see more of Aya's thoughts on what happened to Ken. How does Aya feel about Ken? I also like how you have set up Schwarz some more interaction between all of them would be nice. This is a really good start and I am looking forward to reading the rest.
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Reviewed By: toniq [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:09 CST
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i really like this so far ^_^ and thanks for the updates
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