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| "Complications" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2015 21:55 PST
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this is the first time I've come across your fan fics, and I
thought I pass on a few thoughts. I read all the stories you have
here and liked them. you have a good sense of humor, and your
conversations run very smoothly. Your charactorizations are fairly
accurate, and the stories open up nicely. you have a good
imagination and the ability to tell a good story. I'm glad I found
you. Don't stop writing.
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 19:18 PDT
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tono, dono, sama... all acceptable to address one of such high station. . . very well written, characterization fit the setting and the players. one loves how you have incorporated what you could of life in sengoku jidai. . . if hanyou are considered such abominations why does kouga want to marry a human and produce hanyou offspring? one would think that he would want full youkai children as heirs and why did sesshoumaru-dono not bring that fact to his attention. and will lord fluff feel the same about kouga's hanyou offspring as he feels about his brother? a bit hypocritical aren't we all? . . . i love your work, so well written sprinkled with wry humor. i shall be in eager anticipation of more. ~ truly a pleasure, ginny
| Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 08:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this, it's a shame you haven't updated in a while, but i hope you do soon. very well written and in character, as well. Thank you for posting!
| Reviewed By: Wowzer313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Hey, I've got to say, this is really great! I agree with the other reviewers, it's really original, and has the makings of a fantastic story. I thought Sesshomaru's character was especially good, what with all of his high-falootin' language and what not. I'm also curious to find out how exactly he convinced Inuyasha to move in...hm. Did he go the diplomatic way, or did he simply kick the crap out of our favorite hanyou? I know you haven't updated in a while, but you should...and I know you get online, because you just reviewed my story--and thank you for that review, by the way. Anyway, love it, keep up the good work!
| Title: Great Stuff
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 21:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is great. Totally in character. Really a neat twist on the basic romantic challenge. THought you wrote Sesshomaru particularly well. Write more. I'll trade you reviews:)
| Reviewed By: Little Owl On: January 11, 2006 14:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutly brilliant!!! You did a great job in the parts of traditional practices which I personally think emphasises the story's time and location. Also great parts you put them in!!! Please please please please update soon1!!!!
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 20:41 PST
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Sweet story. I really like how you set it up, and the potential energy that is already building with Inuyasha and Kagome's situations. I just have one, tiny little nitpicky I'm a perfection freak thing. I think that a servant would address a lord as "-sama," not "-dono." Maybe you're right, since you did do research, but from what I've seen it should be sama. Anyways, not meaning to criticize horribly, or flame, just something I noticed. You actually have very good information on the feudal era. Everything you've expalined is well researched and incorporated. I look forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:15 PST
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hmmm...well u've got me interested...i'm digging it! please continue i'd like to read about kags take on her arrangment with kouga & can't wait till she meets inu! thanks 4 sharing smooches smittin! ^_^
| Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 12:41 PST
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I'm always up for a good Inu-Kag story....and yours has a beginning that's caught my interest for sure! Does Kagome realize what she's getting into? I mean, does she realize that she's being courted by Kouga? The only reason I ask is that many fics make her really naive about her interaction with him...almost to the point of pain for the reader. Though, usually her naivete is explained by the fact that she's from the modern era where relationships b/w male and female friends can be quite friendly without having the same connotations as I'd imagine they would back in the Fuedal era. I'm curious as to how your Kagome, being a contemporary of our feudal demons...will act. At any rate, I'm looking forward to reading about her...and of course reading about the great Inuyasha. And when they get to meet one another...sparks? :)
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