"An Unusual Father" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Reader Reviewed By: SmacksKiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 21:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Very Good, quite an original story! You should try getting a beta reader, the grammar mistakes ruins a perfectly good story.
| Reviewed By: HappyPig [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 03:22 CST Comment/Review: Has a lot of potential and i'm looking forward to more chapters.
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