"The Fun of Jealously" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: SoraRikuluvor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 16:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Don't shut his ex out I mean come on it's just one fight, those two, looked so Kawii together, but then again Riku and sora are the perfect couple... But at least let there be conflict, and have Leon give Sora his jacket, you know when two people are going out, the dommint gives up his jacket to the ute, I really like tins fanfic keep me posted when updating
| Reviewed By: redcharm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 18:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. Nice fic. I couldn't stop giggling all day for reading this. When are you updating again? it is very original. Update soon!! ^-^*
| Reviewed By: HiKaRiKu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it!^^ I bet that voice is Riku,isn't it? muahhaha I WILL Be right!!=P anywho,yay!I'm first to review!^^ Please read my story!!its called,Love!(In Kingdom Hearts of course)
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