| "School of the fallen Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: law916 On: September 19, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your mind. This is one of the most enjoyable Fic I've read in a long time. Please Update Soon!!!!!!!!! You truly have a great gift for writing, please don't ever stop!!!!!!!!!!! Also I really want Riku to win, I'm a romantic.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Sairu9 On: April 27, 2005 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where the heck did u come up wiht such ideas???? Damn nice story,keep updating it.And Riku has to win.he just has too!!! thank you!!!^.^
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Reviewed By: Immortality_elixer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's very artistic and interesting. I hope you keep writing it, I will read it for sure. (the only reason why I got an account is because I wanted to comment on your peice)
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant man, just brilliant. Your spelling, grammar, and punctuation needs serious work. Maybe you should get a someone to edit it for you before you post it. I could do it for you if you want. But, enough about that, update soon!! {([I'd love edit your work])}
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Reviewed By: Rikus TRUE lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF? ???!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cliffhanger here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MAn that was brutal wat happened to Soran!OMFG you are so kool! i absplutly LOVE your fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its soooooooooooooo koooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!pleaz update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*ahem*so yah i love you story,original and pure enjoyment!in a scale from 1-10 i give it a 100!
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome action packed chapter...but it was sad! ansem is a bastard! update some more!
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 16:52 CST
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Wow. That is the only way to describe it. I wish my fics were this good. I guess I'm more of a critic than a writer. If you ever get a chance read em. They are pretty short right now. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: VampiricEssence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR FIC IS AWESOME!Its really weird bout the package,and Sora loving his brother in THAT way and all.Who cares though right?Your fic is great!Update soon!To the favorite page!
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 19:14 CST
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yay! loved new chapter! it was weird listening to it with 'the reason' by hoobastank in the back round, but great just the same! finally, riku and sora! yay! so...if kira and sora are brothers...and they used to be lovers...*shudder* that's...uhm...interesting...NO! RIKU BETTER WIN!
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Title: 4
Reviewed By: love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 17:24 CST
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oooo...it's turning into a scary ghost story!!! anyways, i like ghost stories (i just got finished reading a really freaky one), and i really like this story...i laughed really hard (like riku did) when sora said he kicked ansem in the privets...tee...that was funny. speaking of ansem, he's also scaring me...is he okay...you know, mentally? well, this was another great chapter...you have to continue! ~_^ Shi~Chan
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah...this is a cool story! Riku is my hero! Yay! Go Riku! He saved Sora, and now i'm happy. I love rXs, and this one is awesome! hurry up and continue.
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 09:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I love how you added Kairi into the story. That does make the rest of the school seem kinda dumb though. You would think that they would figure it out. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic. There arent many good kingdom hearts fics. I want to see more. keep it up.
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