| "Only When It Rains" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE. UPDATE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!! PLEASE!!! *hestericaly sobs* SO GOOD! I LOVED THIS!
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: September 19, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOKIN GOOD UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 23:18 CDT
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Awesome! I know it's been a while since you have updated this fic, but please do so as soon as possible. This is such a good fic!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: March 28, 2005 03:11 CST
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I'm back reviewing for you!! How can I not, though, when this is SUCH a great story! And it DID take you forever to update, but I got my fluff for the night... YEAH!! Anywho, pls don't take so long next time to update... I had to go back and reread the entire story (though, I didn't mind in the least!) to remember what was going on! Wonderful continuation, and it seems to me that our dear hanyou is getting a little mate-crazy... WOOHOO!! About dang time!
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Reviewed By: gilmork On: January 29, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. I love fluffy Inu/Kag action! Now for the constructive criticism - and I promise, it's constructive, not mean. If I didn't really like this story, I wouldn't review at all! 1. Threw means that you flung something away from you. Through means, you know, everything else. Like "an arrow through his heart" or "I'm through reading this stupid review!" 2. You're is a contraction of the words "you" and "are". Your means something belongs to you. If you can substitute the words "you are" in the sentence, then use you're. If you mean something belongs to someone, use your. As in, "Your review (the review that belongs to me) really sucks, Gilmork - piss off!" Or "You're (you are) getting on my nerves, Gilmork!" 3. Apostrophies with an s are only used to show possession of something. Like "Gilmork's review". Otherwise, *leave the apostrophe out* when you're adding an s on the end of a word. "Gilmork write's the worst review's" is wrong, wrong, wrong! At least gramatically speaking, that is. And there you have it! I'd be happy to beta you, if you'd like. I really am enjoying the story! Keep up the good work! You can email me at mediaminer.org @ secretdonkey. com (take out the spaces) Next lesson - Homophones: Not a Yaoi Communication Device! Huggles, Gilmork
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 05:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally!!! A new chapter!! Aaahhhh, just as good as the last one. Arigato, my friend, arigato!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome. Whats going to happen next? I look forward to the next chapter ^__^
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, man, this just keeps getting sadder and sadder!! But I'm loving it! I just hope it picks up into some good mushy stuff eventually...SORRY, can't help it if I'm a hopeless romantic!!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW....one word....wow!!!! That chappie almost made me cry but i'm strong!!!lol.....keep writing please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 08:04 CST
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hey its really god so far i hope yoou keep it up ok you got me hooked and i cant wait for the next chapter well thanks for a good story so far ;)
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Reviewed By: Zonza (not logged in) On: November 25, 2004 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sad chapter, it made me cry... and since I double checked and it's not a one-shot I'm very intrested to see what happens next! You've got me hooked with the first paragraph, not an easy feat, let me tell ya! Curiosity is eating me alive, I very much want to know what happened between the two where he almost let her die... I pretty sure it's gotta deal with Kikyou, at least you hint at it anyways... Hope to be reading more soon... ~Zonza
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