"What the hell are you doing?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sessys girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 21:25 CDT Comment/Review: that was soooo cute!
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Reviewed By: h On: July 17, 2006 18:01 CDT Comment/Review: cute, but isn't one of sesshomaru's arms cut off?
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Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 23, 2006 15:51 CST Comment/Review: a sequel would be nice! this is my FAVORITE pairing, but there arent a lot....
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Reviewed By: Higurashi_Suteki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 11:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Its really good the lack of quotaions are confusing but the originality and quality of most of your fics override it.
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: November 26, 2004 15:13 CST Comment/Review: What's with your inability to use quotations when people speak? Those dashes are ridiculous and confusing. If you want to write then do so, if you want to make it look like a script then write a frelling script and stop confusing the two.
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Title: wow another great one-shot. Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: November 25, 2004 14:18 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: did anyone ever tell you you write to much? J/k but you must have a lot of time on your hands to be writing all these great one-shots! I can't wait for you next one. Hey could you do a Shippo/ Kirara one? Please. I mean there so few of them and I just wish there was more floating around here.
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