| "A little bit of...." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: November 29, 2004 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Just so you know, the sperm doesn't fertilize the egg untill some time (as much as four days!) after sex. A woman doesn't make pregnancy hormones untill after the fertilized egg (zygote) implants in the womb. Much later. Sorry. Had to vent. Thanks for the lemon.
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Reviewed By: insane anime On: November 28, 2004 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
my. you have been busy, writing all these stories.
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Title: MORE!
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: November 25, 2004 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I demand at least another chapter! What happen to Kagome/Kouga? Did Kouga live to see another day or what? I wanna know!
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