| "A Well Too Deep" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: ruthbalboa On: June 08, 2009 18:31 CDT
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great story, loved it soo far. Please continue it. I think you should add a yaoi scene now.
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 08, 2005 11:16 CDT
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I just found your story and I completely love it. I love how you show the emotions that each character feels with such a devotion to the story plot. This is one of my favorite stories that I have read. Please update soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: foxyrosy On: June 30, 2005 12:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Nice plot and drama between the characters the taboo between hiei and kurama kinda reminded me of romeo and juliet and their conflict from being together. Hope you continue I would like to see how this ends. Watch your grammar a little though and spelling.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (not logged in) On: June 15, 2005 00:25 CDT
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nice chapter. the detail you added for the taboo was pretty interesting. weird how Koenma had to give something up in order for Kurama and Hiei to be happy. but i suppose it's okay since he still has Botan. update soon! ( i want the gore:)
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 18:50 CST
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No, it's still great despite the change in style! ^-^ About the part with Morana earlier, it reminded me of Hades, with the river Styx and her use of death's power. If you've heard the Greek story of the man, I forget his name, who went to Hades to retrieve his lost lover, but looked back too soon and lost her, their exit of the place was like that - one wrong step and it's all over. I like the metaphor of the well, too. It is appropriate. I really liked the whole thing with the pendants - Morana's plan wasn't original, but your plot was as original as a thing can be. And you did fine on the lemon lime scene. Just as a request, could you go into the whole thing with Koenma choosing a love? It is a little confusing. Your characterization of Koenma is charming, though. Also, I really appreciate that you make the effort to avoid or correct grammatical and spelling errors, because it makes for a much easier - not to mention enjoyable - read.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT! Is this posted on Fanfiction, because I do believe i've read it before! You must keep writing as quickly as you can! This story is simply amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't wait i tell you! Well, I hope you write soon (but no rush, I completely understand both life's hectic manner and writers block so take your time! hehehe, i seem to like contradicting myself ^.^) I await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another really good story. i must admit, i was kinda confused in the beginning because of how you started it. i figured it was a sequel or something. but i like how you're gradually releasing information as the story goes on. it makes it all the more interesting. & the little curse thing you came up with was cool too. this story just keeps getting better. update soon!
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