| "Mysterious Past" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: Zircrubyon[not signed in] On: April 22, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Real good.oh, and congrads on your computer.
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Reviewed By: Nicodemus756 On: January 19, 2006 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've really done well my dear. You're writing impresses me, and to think you told me that you couldn't write. The story line is very original and shows that you have creativity. The way you're using the characters, and the way you're getting deeper into their psyche is a really interesting approach that isnt seen often in other Fics. You're doing well and keep up the good work. BTW, I LOVE Asheara.
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Reviewed By: Yami Rosewhip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story,your writing does not suck.I can't wait till you continue this.
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