| "Love Is...." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: KoorimeFireGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol parts of this are really funny. i'll have to have some of my friends read it too. I'm sure they'll LOVE it! great job so far! Ja-ne
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 06:50 CST
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Ok this is on the other chaps. Well I think that Hiei's relationship with the person is going way too fast. I hope I don't let you get angry about me saying this. Anyways maybe you could do a little Mary-sue. Sorry if this annoys you but I am giving you helpful criticism. I don't like to be mean to people so don't think I am being mean to you. Well great story so far! Update soon! -InTheShadows.
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 06:18 CST
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Um...I just thought I should tell you this. If you were born in 1990 then she would be 14. Because I was born on August 31st, 1990 and I am 14 just thought I should tell you that....he he....OH FIRST TO REVIEW!! -InTheShadows.
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