| "Summer days" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: A On: July 09, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lost a bit of points because of grammar and spelling, and though I can understand the style, I'm sure there would be people reading one of your fics for the first time would be a bit confused. Other than that, excellent fic! I don't know what to say about the otherwise OOC Sesshomaru and Inuyasha, but when Sango describes Takara as a treasure sent from the heavens, I thought that was cute. :)
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Reviewed By: Teki'i On: May 25, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you're going to write a fan fiction, you should at least check spelling, grammar and the proper Japanese language. You should also include quotations to know where and when the person finishes speaking. (That includes most of your fan fics)
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Title: The end??
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hold on! You can't stop now Aoji needs to give have sessh baby too! poor Jaken he fainted! Whatever happen to Kouga? Also how did sessh get his arm back? See there so many questions still unanswered which is why you have to at least do one more chapter. Please update please....
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Reviewed By: Hot Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it but, Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are very ooc but I enjoyed it. The part where Sesshomaru presented Takara, I laughed my ass off at that one. The world need more writers like you.
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