| "FAMILY SECRETS" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: aliah (not signed) On: April 02, 2005 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!!! I love it to death!!!! lol and the rabid fangirls... heh..heh, just kiss him in full view of them and hopefully they'll go away.... also, i hope you update sooooooooooooonnnnnnn!!!!!!
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Title: ROCKIN'
Reviewed By: KitsuneCuckoo On: March 30, 2005 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool!!! The romance is so......romantic. LOL Keep it up. and plz update soon.
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Title: (didn't log in)
Reviewed By: me On: March 30, 2005 17:05 CST
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suggestions.....well, i think it would be cool if Gwen had to mess with the fangirls again, but just make sure that the same doesn't happen that's happened before. in other words, make sure that when you are repeating events like this, it has to be interesting enouh for us to remember and recognize it to be different and better than the last run in with the fangirls. but i have n doubt that u cane make this more interesting than our wild imaginations!!!! yay, hurry and update!!! ciao for now! (wait, that's ur line...see, i'm rading so much of ur work that ur starting to rub off!!!)
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Title: Suggestions...
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:21 CST
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do u think Gwen should fight the fan girls at her school or not?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 20:31 CST
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man, Nano sure put Yoko in his place. I know for sure that Hiei is older than Yukina, Don't quote me on the twins thing, but I'm almost positive that they are. so, update again soon. I luv your chapters so long as they're more than one page long. k then, bye.
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Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:53 CST
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i'll be working on the next chappie this week. i'll do my best to post it before friday.
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Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man..this is a awsome chapter..you must write more. I can't wait till the Youko Nano talk and will Kurama say i Love you? just awsome girl^^
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Reviewed By: Meepity On: March 27, 2005 20:09 CST
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Yay!!!! You are a really good writer, I wish could write half as well as you, lol. Almost no flaws, I'd only say that the "Don't own it" sidecomments get a bit disturbing, I mean, after a while, they're not all that neccessary (most likely spelled that wrong) Anyway, rock on!! {insert norm, "I love this fic, updates soon, here}
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:55 CST
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I'll do my very best to put the next chapter up before the week is out :)
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Reviewed By: MeggyBoo On: March 27, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok this is tha coolest chapter eva!!!! frig that this is tha coolest fanfic eva! lol o and if u want to get rid of the rabid fangirls make a REALLY convicing Kurama clone hopefully they'll fall for it ne? lol until next time :D update sooon pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleas? lol bye
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Title: COKE
Reviewed By: WS@W#$R%YHGSWE$ On: March 27, 2005 10:11 CST
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Put the lime in the coke, you nut, drink it all up... oh, bye! (that's a cool song, i see it on American Idol commercials all the time, yay!)
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Title: i didn't log in either!!! he he he
Reviewed By: WS@W#$R%YHGSWE$ On: March 27, 2005 10:09 CST
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GAAAAAAHHHHHHH, how can you do this to us!?!??! how can you write such an awesome chapter and then...MAKE US WAIT!!!!! GAAAAAHHHHH...bleh. ok, just please hurrrrrrry hurrrrry hurrrrrry and update, ok? ok, good!!! bye bye, 'til my next review (which you will get quicker if you update...*hint hint*)
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Title: didn't log in...
Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY0 On: March 27, 2005 10:05 CST
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yet another outstanding chapter, you know what that means right!??!?!.......WE WANT ANOTHER ONE!!!!! don't keep us waiting and don't take your precious time because all that time turns into waiting for us!! kk, i'm off, bye bye!!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 13:15 CST
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nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! must read more! you must update soon!
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Reviewed By: TheFluffster On: March 19, 2005 18:52 CST
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yay another new, awesome, ooberly cool, outstanding chapter!!! ..... NOOOO it's the end of the chapter!11 come on help us out here!!!! keep up the good work and put ur brilliant mind to work...please!!!! anyway, good job keep it up, bye bye
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