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Reviewed By: Ookami Suriya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 04:02 CDT
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Its really good. I like the whole story exept the ending. The ending just....blows...ya'know? takes away the feel of the whole story..
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos On: February 14, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don' think that your weird for haven' an Inuyasha as a full demon fetish... I have one too! Hentai that I am.Also the story was alright for a one shot.
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Reviewed By: sunshine07 On: November 29, 2004 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
that was really good!!!!! plz write more stories!!!!
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Title: Nani???
Reviewed By: Amon's Lover Girl On: November 28, 2004 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean not everyone has a thing for the demon Inuyasha?? I live for that form!!! I liked the story Kagome knows she wanted him too who wouldn't! no shame in that and Plus he marked her Lucky bitch (his bitch HEHEHE) Hey I Would switch plances with her LOLOL Well keep on writing You did good lots of love XOxOXXOXO
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Title: You asked...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 20:18 CST
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I think it's really good. And I too have a fetish with Inuyasha becoming a full demon. I think this could be a great longer fic. You could do so much more than a one shot, but you need to do what feels right to you so if you like the one shot leave it! If you want to add more add more!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:53 CST
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dude!! loved it! i'm all for full demon yasha and kagome stories! i'm working on one myself right now...to follow up my first lemon one-shot. the unfortunate thing is that there doesn't seem to be *that* much room for creativity when it comes to putting together a full youkai inu and kag lemon. but props to you...i wish there were more attempts at writing 'em! i too have a bit of a fetish for that pairing! well, i love inu and kag in any form... :)
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Reviewed By: blazingnymph7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:28 CST
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umm...interesting...you do realize that there is some real potential for a very decent if not long fanfic? All in all it very good:>
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