| "Acts of Violence" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 18, 2005 11:05 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten (again) On: May 22, 2005 16:33 CDT
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(oh and i agree with the other reviewers on their reasoning ^_^)
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten (not signed in) On: May 22, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed this story i also believe kurama would act in about the same way please write more stories i will be waiting ^_~
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Reviewed By: Laural Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your characterization was dead on! I actually found Kurama's reaction refreshing, and very appropriate, rather like your other reviewers, apparently. I couldn't catch any mistakes, and I can't think of any ways to improve this, which is unusual for me. I'm generally (nit)picky. Very nice job!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 03, 2005 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with your first reviewer and I really like the way Kurama reacted. If I were him or were capable of doing something similar, that is how I would react. He is a survivor and would do whatever was necessary to deal with whatever situation he found himself in.
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Title: i think you should update
Reviewed By: me On: January 30, 2005 17:12 CST
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interesting point of view on kurama's reaction to the assault. we forget, i suppose, that he is not human and would not neccesarily have a human reaction to the abuse. if he'd been around the block a couple hundred times... it would stand to reason he'd be less phased but what might shut others down. survival instincts first - i can totally see that. the more animalistic he is, the less meaning he'd place on the sex anyway - i think it's an interesting angle.
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