| "~ YuYuHakusho ~ Enter the Realm of the Well" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 01:05 CST
Comment/Review:
aww poor shippo. this is a great story, i hope you update it soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel bad for shippo damit K should have realized what was happening seince he could heree everything they said.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when you can please update.
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Reviewed By: Evil Toilet Paper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction wasn't so bad. I hope it is kagome/kurama although it seems to be heading in that direction. not bad. could use a little polish but still good. update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i would like you to contiue i like this story so far and I want to see what you come up with.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!! please upsate soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 13:35 CST
Comment/Review:
dude, what's up with writing the entire story in the summary section?
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally finished what you have so far! ^______^ Please update! This is great!
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 13:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job so far! Just few errors, okay? First, Kagome's name is Higurashi, not Hirugashi. Second, in the anime she only finds out about the well on her fifteenth birthday, but whatever. I don't mean to be mean or rude, I just like correcting mistakes... It kinda goes with having a copy-editor for a mom.
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Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:42 CST
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Ummmm... May I make the assumption that you don't know how to post the chapters correctly? What you have to do is write the story in a separate Microsoft Word or Text document. When adding a new chapter, choose the file that has your story in it. You don't have to put it in the summary area.
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