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"Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2005 09:23 CST
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Wow that was sad... I cried! It's really good though. I like stories that can make me cry. ^_^ So, you are going to continue this story, right? I hope so, it's quite good.
 Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 15, 2005 00:27 CST
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Simply splendid. After reading that last chapter, i am completely without words. Your writing is so imcredibly powerful, i actually got a physical pain in my chest. A sympathy pain, i think it was. That's never happened to me before while reading a fanfic. My entire being completely revolted against what kyo and tohru were put through. I can only imagine the reactions of the other members of the zodiac. Gah! I really really hope akito eventually gets what's coming to him. I just...cannot condone his actions. Then again, i haven't read the manga, and it seems there's a lot more to that twisted boy than i know about. Anyway, i guess what i'm really trying to say is that this fic is spectacular. I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews. Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2005 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was really intense. You weren't kidding when you said this wasn't a happy story. I'm just reviewing all the chapters you updated tonight. I'm hoping you update more soon, because as sad and terrible as this story is, it's good. If that makes any sense at all. It's good in the sense that it's logical. I can see Akito doing that...I can see Kyo wanting to be the one to hurt her rather than risk Akito doing something worse. I really don't want to see her being forced to have her memories erased though. I mean, if you make it logical, then ok. But I really don't want to see that happen.
 Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2005 13:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm also not a fan of unhappy endings, however, if they fit well, and work with the story, then I prefer that to a happy ending that makes no sense. I'm hoping you are still working on this story, although I suspect you aren't since it's been so long since it's been updated. If you are, please update it!!
 Reviewed By: inu_lover_4eva [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 12:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i don't like unhappy endings but I'll give this one a chance.
 Reviewed By: sohmas_are_great [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 09, 2005 09:27 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't believe no one else has written a review yet!! If you're still working on this story, please update. I have a sneaking suspision that Tohru's memories got erased but I want you to confirm or deny it. Either that or Akito raped her. I thought that it moved a little fast toward the end, with the *almost* lemon chappie, but then again, kyo had a lot of pent-up anger and frustration so its to be expected i suppose. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!!!

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