| "I'll see you in my dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: neat
Reviewed By: bad angel12 On: August 09, 2005 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story liked it a lot.
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: demonfox6 On: August 09, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story keep wrighting.
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Reviewed By: Kitty-Hanyou On: May 11, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic alot.
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Reviewed By: much_x3_mandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is so cool, i can't beleive Travis like...RAPED her ewwy-ewwwww, thanx for warning, reading that would like...gimme nitemares soo anyways, plz update soooon i gotta noe wut happens! and befor i go, i gotta say teh way you make Travis seem like a villan makes me think...he IS a villan, well keep up teh good work!
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Reviewed By: Hamtaro_is_mah_homie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
oh plz plz plz! update! or else i will review 10 times myself.....lol, i likes it a lot, ciao
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Reviewed By: Hamtaro_is_mah_homie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT IS GREAT!! OMG STUPID TRAVIS! ROBERTO IS NICE ^^ I LIKE IT A LOT!! UPDATE PLZZZZZ!!!
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Title: keep writing
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: January 26, 2005 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
cmon!! keep writing i wanna see what happens next!!!! great stuff!
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Reviewed By: D.L. Angelgirl On: January 25, 2005 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE !!!!!!!!!! I like LoraxRaberto fanfictions!! Theres not that that much of these kind of fanfic. So please write more.
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Reviewed By: Dustbunny3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, again. This is getting interesting though the mechanics are still off. I can understand having a bad computer and whatnot, though. If you want I can pre-read your chapters before you post them. Anyway, can hardly wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Dustbunny3. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love RobertoLaura! This seems like it could be very interesting. But there were several problems with this. The formatting is almost impossible to go through. It's hard to read when the quotes are jumbled with the description. Laura's dad would have been more concerned if Roberto was carrying Laura like he was. And he'd probably have a bit more to say about them almost kissing. Also, I'm pretty sure Brandy is a boy and if Laura was having odd dreams or anything, she'd talk to Hamtaro whether or not he was important to the storyline.
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