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Title: lookie!! lookie!! a review!!
Reviewed By: TearfulInsanity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome story!! it's the first TT/anything that i've read, but oh. it. is. good. why do you not update?! you left a HORRIBLE cliffhanger!! does botan get away? who does she see? will there be more lemons? (sorry, i'm one of those more perverted readers you talked about... ^_^U) please!!! please!! please!!! write more!!!!!!!!
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Title: ffarg baby: Review of Chapter 1&2
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 06:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chapters, I think, are really short, and could be combined. This, along with a few very minor grammar errors, were the only things that were off--and perhaps a tendancy to write short lines rather than paragraphs. "The Evil in Us All" could probably do with some more detail writing wise, but if its aiming to be a light-hearted comedy crossover, then I suppose more serious writing with elaborate descriptions isn't necessary. Overall, the grammar and spelling was good and what little I've read was entertaining. Thanks for submitting to FFARG (thus giving kids like me something to do with rainy days)! :cDee
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Title: i didn't know i had to do this again
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: July 30, 2005 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
-sighs- your making me send another threatening review... i hate doing this but i enjoy this fic so much. So either you write it or i will send my squirrel army to force you, and they like to eat brains! EVIL SQUIRRELS! -The randomravenfan
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Kit the Kitsune On: July 29, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it please hurry up and type and update real soon. i can't wait for the lemon chap between Raven and Hiei it's going to be great!
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Title: DIE KUWABAKA!
Reviewed By: randomdbzfan On: July 29, 2005 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kuwabaka should die... and Yukina should hate him... i need to say that
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Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: July 28, 2005 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
alright, enough of the fake id, my real name is "mistress of the furious cloak"... i'm gonna start my teen titans fic soon... i hae a DBZ fic... I WANT MORE... (more more more more more) Hiei and Raven... Hiei and Raven...
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Title: I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!
Reviewed By: DemonGirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRR! I liked it but... write more please before I have to release my demon! Oh and... I'm daddy's lil demon too ^.^ I wasn't a member before so that was my nick oh and HIEI'S MINE!!! Hehe! Can you check out my fic? A Raven's Feelings please? UPDATE before I go ballistic!
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Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow....that....was...ugly. i never suspected her to do that to him, and kuwabara to do that......hiei was really mad. i wonder if things between yukina and kuwabarawill ever be the same.....this chapter made me sad *sobs* really sad. poor kazuma ! PUS!!
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Title: IT HAD NO RAVEN AND HIEI!!!
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: July 21, 2005 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dragon of darkness, Thank you so much for continuing your fan fic, it means alot that i got you to start writing again. Oh, the whole threatening thing, i didn't mean to scare you, but i really meant it ^-^". All and all its okay but i hope the next chapter will have a heated Raven/Hiei moment, like in part one of that night. Because you said there should be heated action soon. I REALLY WANT HEATED ACTION BETWEEN HIEI AND RAVEN. I love you ^-^ But i will hunt you down if you forget about this fic again ^.^ But really, it means alot and thanks! I hope i can keep you writing this fanfic! ~The randomravenfan ps. My friend (inuyoukai1450) can vouch that i would come find you (SOME WAY!) ^_^ Pss. thankies ^-^
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Reviewed By: Mr. Wednesday On: July 20, 2005 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! you finally uptated!! *does happy dance* i still don't know why you are so subconscious about your writing... it's all magnificent!! you only have one story posted, though... and i still havent found any other hiei/raven fics... *pouts*...anyway... please post soon!!! (soon not being four and a half months :( ) ^.^
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dangit you just left me there for so long! And yes Kuwabaka is STILL going DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: your taking TO LONG
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: July 14, 2005 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN IF YOU DON'T START ADDING MORE CHAPPIES!! -sobs- its really cute and really good and i really want your computer FIXED. FIX IT NOW GOD DAMN IT! really* (correcting my previous grammar error) i must say its a cute turn on things... i still re-read the last chappie you posted over and over again. Its good... especially the raven/hiei please continue! ~The randomravenfan
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Reviewed By: Bad_boy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fics i have ever read! you have to update it as soon as you can! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Nuuuu!!! I don't this to end!!!
Reviewed By: DemonGirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must finish as soon as your computer is back on!!! now!!! I swear I will kill you if this isnt going to finish!!! >.
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Title: Wooohoooo!
Reviewed By: poikaer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooooohoooooo! You're my idol! I like the story a lot! Sorry about the "9" on "Enjoyment Factor." I just don't get what's going on sometimes, because I've only read like two Yu Yu Hakusho manga, and I've only seen two episodes of Kenshin (that's where we are now, is it not?)...Keep it up, my homey! heh...
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Title: You Suck
Reviewed By: Anonymous_me On: May 25, 2005 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alisandra, YOU ARE A HORRIBLE WRITER! You should just give up on writing and go live in a box somewhere, or jump off a cliff. I'll flame you if you write more of the story. YAY! FLAMES! Write now, or I'll beat you savagely with sporks or I'll kick you in the face. Have a nice day! No, wait. I lied. ^o^ ~*~Anonymous~*~
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Title: WRITE IT NOW
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: April 20, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long story short, its realyl good, needs to check some grammar issues (very few) but it's AWESOME! WRITE MORE!!!! (loves Raven/Hiei) HURRY Up^^ love ya story, come on and finish it... :P
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Reviewed By: daddys lil demon On: April 04, 2005 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
omigawd! I am so going to kill you if you don't finish now! I'm loving the Hiei and Raven thing because they're some of favorite characters. I woulkdn't have mind a Hiei and Sango one too. These two are definitely my favorite couples. I'll stay by Hiei's side foreva! Any girl with him is fine with me as long as she's strong and calm. NEVER SAY HIEI IS GAY OR AS GOD AS MY WITNESS I WILL KILL ANYONE WHO SAYS HE IS! Love ya story! Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: k.t.w.h (kyli the wolf hanyou) On: March 16, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate nooooooooooooow
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Reviewed By: Naru aka Kathi On: March 14, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^o^ LOVED IT AKARI!! lol It's awesome...sorry I couldn't review all the other tymes...I was busy...Well, I'm busy rite now cause im at skool but o well!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! oOo I lyke yore 'beyond reality' story too!!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Wednesday On: March 10, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is awesome!!! i love the hiei/raven pairing. i have never seen it anywhere else; it's underrated. please update?
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Reviewed By: Faia On: February 28, 2005 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this fic is Awesome! just one question WHY RAVEN AND HIEI? I just wanna know cause I never thought about that kind of pairing its kinda weird yet cool
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssse continue. Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssse! I REEEAAALLLY like it so far. By the way...WTF is Kuwabaka doing to Yukina?! I'll kill if he does anything to her. -___-
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Title: NO!!
Reviewed By: Faia On: February 24, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! EVIL ONNA!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was sooooo good. Damn..your a better writer than me...-_-''...well anyways sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I finally got my new computer and now I'm doing AMV's for ppl...I'm also trying to write up the last few scenes for my 2nd chapter of Most Wanted! ANYWAYS! Great chapter and I can't wait for more! GOOOOOOO GIRL!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: -midnightdemon On: February 13, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a very cruel, evil person to just cut it off there. just so you know.
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Title: upgrade
Reviewed By: flamewolves On: February 13, 2005 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when areyou going to upgrade? Email me at teencoyote@lycos.com and tell me please?
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Reviewed By: purplellama On: February 12, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, I loved the chapter, I love Hiei and Raven together, my two fave characters besides Blackfire and Sesshie&Rin... I pity the fool that interrupted Rae and Hiei gettin' it AWN! Heh, I love that phrase... Anyway, plz write more, its to good so far. ^-^
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Reviewed By: monkey-dooodle On: February 10, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
girl you got it on! dont stop dont stop! i would love to see what happens in the future stuff! man! woot woot! go star! but what about her sister and kurama? i find it deeply important that you mention them! keep going girl!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it! PLease update soon! But I still hate you for cutting off early!
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