| "The Evil In Us All" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Title: You Suck
Reviewed By: Anonymous_me On: May 25, 2005 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alisandra, YOU ARE A HORRIBLE WRITER! You should just give up on writing and go live in a box somewhere, or jump off a cliff. I'll flame you if you write more of the story. YAY! FLAMES! Write now, or I'll beat you savagely with sporks or I'll kick you in the face. Have a nice day! No, wait. I lied. ^o^ ~*~Anonymous~*~
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Title: WRITE IT NOW
Reviewed By: randomravenfan On: April 20, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long story short, its realyl good, needs to check some grammar issues (very few) but it's AWESOME! WRITE MORE!!!! (loves Raven/Hiei) HURRY Up^^ love ya story, come on and finish it... :P
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Reviewed By: daddys lil demon On: April 04, 2005 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
omigawd! I am so going to kill you if you don't finish now! I'm loving the Hiei and Raven thing because they're some of favorite characters. I woulkdn't have mind a Hiei and Sango one too. These two are definitely my favorite couples. I'll stay by Hiei's side foreva! Any girl with him is fine with me as long as she's strong and calm. NEVER SAY HIEI IS GAY OR AS GOD AS MY WITNESS I WILL KILL ANYONE WHO SAYS HE IS! Love ya story! Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: k.t.w.h (kyli the wolf hanyou) On: March 16, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate nooooooooooooow
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Reviewed By: Naru aka Kathi On: March 14, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^o^ LOVED IT AKARI!! lol It's awesome...sorry I couldn't review all the other tymes...I was busy...Well, I'm busy rite now cause im at skool but o well!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! oOo I lyke yore 'beyond reality' story too!!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Wednesday On: March 10, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is awesome!!! i love the hiei/raven pairing. i have never seen it anywhere else; it's underrated. please update?
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Reviewed By: Faia On: February 28, 2005 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this fic is Awesome! just one question WHY RAVEN AND HIEI? I just wanna know cause I never thought about that kind of pairing its kinda weird yet cool
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssse continue. Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssse! I REEEAAALLLY like it so far. By the way...WTF is Kuwabaka doing to Yukina?! I'll kill if he does anything to her. -___-
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Title: NO!!
Reviewed By: Faia On: February 24, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! EVIL ONNA!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: black fire angel (not logged in) On: February 16, 2005 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was sooooo good. Damn..your a better writer than me...-_-''...well anyways sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I finally got my new computer and now I'm doing AMV's for ppl...I'm also trying to write up the last few scenes for my 2nd chapter of Most Wanted! ANYWAYS! Great chapter and I can't wait for more! GOOOOOOO GIRL!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: -midnightdemon On: February 13, 2005 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a very cruel, evil person to just cut it off there. just so you know.
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Title: upgrade
Reviewed By: flamewolves On: February 13, 2005 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when areyou going to upgrade? Email me at teencoyote@lycos.com and tell me please?
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Reviewed By: purplellama On: February 12, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, I loved the chapter, I love Hiei and Raven together, my two fave characters besides Blackfire and Sesshie&Rin... I pity the fool that interrupted Rae and Hiei gettin' it AWN! Heh, I love that phrase... Anyway, plz write more, its to good so far. ^-^
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Reviewed By: monkey-dooodle On: February 10, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
girl you got it on! dont stop dont stop! i would love to see what happens in the future stuff! man! woot woot! go star! but what about her sister and kurama? i find it deeply important that you mention them! keep going girl!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it! PLease update soon! But I still hate you for cutting off early!
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