Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 05:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this has potential, given a little more time. I personally like this pairing as well, and think it would be fun to see where you take this. The idea of all the different kingdoms was really neat, and I'd like to see how it all plays out, if you're planning on continuing. Besides, You left both chapters at a cliffhanger, and that's just going to bother me... ^_~
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