| "Cravings" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Destinys Lot On: March 20, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was very cute. hehe Ja ne
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 19:28 CST
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 20:12 EST Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to review everyone's stories!!! You see my Dad has been in the hospital and I had to stay with him..So needless to say when I went to read my mail today I had more than 21 updated stories..and some of them where from the same Author and some from author's I haven't herd from in a while witch was a wonderful surprise!!Sooo all this means I have to do a mass update and I'm sorry for that ..You see I'm so tired I only go two hours sleep last night so don't ask me what is keeping me going..Now this is my review..I have read everyone's stories yes I sat here and read them all ..And I really enjoyed them..And to all of you,You did a great job ,good writing,great story line ,good imagination...Please update again soon...I think on one of the stories I've read some one wanted a challenge uhmm ok I would like to see an 1x2x5 3x4 with Duo leaving for a year at the end of the 2nd war and showing up at the end of that year with a child about 3 mounts old. The child would be Duo's and it's mother died in child birth so now the pilots will live together and raise the child... While 1x2x5 get together ..Well it was just a thought for a challenge...I have to go and get some sleep ..I will leave you with this if you keep writing I'll |
Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 02:02 CST
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hey i like the fic.It was well not what i had expected it to be at all.I hope that u make this into somemore.Well anyway keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: priscel-- On: November 28, 2004 16:20 CST
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that was sweet and interesting. I thought it was a bit vague at the beginning, like what other guys was Heero talking about soundly sleeping in their bunks? if it was the other g-boys wouldn't it have been more specific? or where are they escaping from, some sort of camp? an open cell prison? hmm
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 28, 2004 10:07 CST
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Hahahaha! That was hilarious! Keep up the amazing job!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 09:22 CST
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Lol! Good misdirection! I thought I was going to read The Great Escape, not The Great Pizza Delivery! I loved the 1x2 interaction, and Heero's inner monologue. Not sappy for a single second! But still lovely (can't remember last time I saw a romantic 'cleaning the toilets with a toothbrush scene'...hmm, that would be never...) And Wufei's role was hilarious too :) Me like!
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