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| "The Barrier" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 12:53 CDT
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*shudders, twitches* Nightmares. It was good in a horrifying sort of way
| Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was intense. I was actually pretty scared while I was reading it. It was sad, but I think it was only realistic to end it that way. I feel sorry for both of them. What a wonderful, psychologically gripping story!
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 19:11 CST
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That was incredible, such raw emotion.
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: unnamed On: May 07, 2005 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a great story. Exellent writing!!!! Very dark and disturbing. Good to see Goku as the crazy one. My one complaint is that this is a one-shot. I hope you continue this story at some point :) keeping writing!
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that's it, you are now officialy(sp?) one of my fav authors on this site!!! I read your other fic.. the rain one *shudders* and I just wanted to see if you'd written anything else so.. scary, and.. this takes the cake. It was soo creepy how Goku seemed so much in character, I don't understand how you did it, I really don't, it seems impossible. Goku in character and raping Vegeta??? You are truly one talented writer.
| Title: impressive
Reviewed By: djFusion On: January 15, 2005 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great! Very creativly written. Usually I'm not one for V/G fics, but I couldn't pass this one up! Very nice work. I'll have to be sure to catch some of your other stuff as well! Keep writing! ~ djFusion http://groups.yahoo.com/group/djFusionFiction/
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:59 CST
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A beautiful, dark one-shot (or is this the beginning of a continuation?) Though Goku was cruel, I can understand his frustration at loving someone, wanting acceptance, and receiving only hatred, harsh words, and a wall to keep him out. Easy to see how at a certain point, he would get tired of being knocked around and then have something in him snap. It's interesting how the beating and the rape seemed more of a mark of desperation than a means of degradation and domination- he said he didn't enjoy the beating and it didn't make him feel good; he wanted Vegeta to enjoy it, hoped it was what Vegeta wanted. Seemed like he was so desperate for acceptance he was willing to go to any extreme necessary, and then despaired when he realized it had exactly the opposite effect he'd hoped for. Great psychology. Keep writing!
| Title: Ch 1?
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Just WOW! WOW, that is so deep, enthralling, breath-taking, just, geez! And Goku stayed in character for the whole thing! WOW! Very, very awesome, no, awe-inspiring piece of work! I'd love to see this story go further!
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:51 CST
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BRRRRRrrrrrr. I have a strong aversion to non-con, especially eroticized rape, but the fact that this was Goku, somehow in character, and the fact that your writing is so poetic, psychologically insightful--it really digs into characters' feelings!--made this a very worthwhile piece for me. I'm fascinated with your Goku--and that's weird for me because I'm usually obsessed with Vegeta in stories. The "hey hey Vegeta" and "I'll make it right" lines were chillingly in character. Very powerful piece.
| Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:51 CST
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Oh, wow. I'm limp after all that tension. I love stories like this--where the getting there isn't really explained and the where to go from here never happens. It's just "the moment". That secret time where there is no why--there only is "now". I really thought you nailed Goku's POV on this. There's more there than he ever shows and it doesn't surprise me that Vegeta can bring it out. Very well done. *big thumbs up*
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