| "the pain of blood" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:08 CST
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I've been having trouble getting the last few chapters, I just got them and you should deffinatly do a sequal (sp?). please. Does my vote count for enough? ok then. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 20:34 CST
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aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrgggggg!!!!! I hate cliffies. Hurry up and update, cuz it's killing me not knowing what's gonna happen next. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: uhh this is your sister
Reviewed By: little_evl_me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
the style of writing its a six, which by my standards is pretty high, but the actual style was basically all over the place. you didnt stay constant and the style moved around alot. the spelling and grammer wasnt actually that bad mor of i felt there were a lot of sentence fragments that could of been simply fixed. it was in fact very original in the fact of the whole concept, however in this catagory i dont have a lot of experience so you'll have to get someone elses oppinion. i dont actually know about any of the current yu-yu hakuso fanfics. the story wasnt bad just not in my taste. i couldnt say it was bad, just not my thing but as i said i dont read yu-yu hakuso fanfics. it all in all was a good story maybe with some improvements a great story, it "almost" key word almost kept me entertained the whole time, and that in itself means something.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry that I didn't review before, my computer's an evil monkey somtimes, so I couldn't review or e-mail. Also, my mom yells at me cuz ususally when I'm reading your fic, it's kinda late and I have to shut down the computer. So, super good fic, I want you to update again soon. Please. And um, soot, I forgot. well, once again, update again soon. this has been Kuramas Gurl, thank you, goodbye.
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Title: correction
Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
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i didn't notice anything till i started rereading the story. everytime you say jump you spell it as jumb, and it isn't Kawenma it's Koenma. you can go on yuyuhakusho.com to check it out. sorry for the inconvience
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Linkin Park yay! wait...i'm i the only one recognizing a good story when i read one? it seems really odd that it looks like i'm the only one reviewing. i must say the story is quite good. and that i'm impress cause i dare say it is way better then all of mine combined. well i gtg ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT, mostly all i can say.
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