"Real World Experience" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 16:07 CST Comment/Review: Cool fic!! Um, my idea for Malik and Marik is that Marik takes orders and Malik makes the food. Marik tries to send the customers to the shadow realm but Malik stops him and their manager comes to see if everything is all right and Marik says "everythings fine." and Malik would say "yeah. Everything is perfectly normal." Well, that's my idea and couldn't think of anything else. Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 05:13 CST Comment/Review: it's a cool fic, plz update soon, I'm curious to what you're gonna do to poor Yami
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Title: damnit! Reviewed By: brokensoul13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:46 CST Comment/Review: ok the rest of my review didnt show up so..i'll leave another one ^_^ anyway then the dude will hang up. all that aside, it looks likes its gonna be a good fic ^^ so update! ~brokensoul13~
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Title: hi! ^_^ Reviewed By: brokensoul13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:45 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: well as for telemarketer jokes..i think you should just make bakura argue with them like a guy will pick of the phone and bakura will try and sell something. they guy will say no and bakura will be all like "damn you buy it or i'll send you to the shadow realm! >_
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Title: Pretty cool Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 01:11 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Pretty cool so far I like, please continue
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