| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 04:33 CDT
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I spent an hour reading this story and I must say I like were it is going. If I was Kagome I would have knee'd him so hard that it would've taken surgery to get his nuts back out. I'm glad that your giving Kagome a stronger voice along with her makeover. I wasn't used to her being written as such a wuss and dependant. She's usually the opinionated, strong one that help's everyone else out and not vice-versa. But her being so unsure is what makes your story intriguing. Please make Inu fall for Kagome hard but not return his feelings quickly. He needs to work for her love after all he put her through and if possible give Kikyo and Naruku a nice STD, a real scratchy one. (Evil Laugh mwahahaha) The story is great, update soon
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_babie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really really need to update. don't leave a good story like this hanging cause there are a lot of people waitin on u to update. So get ur azz to typing.
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Reviewed By: HOU On: August 26, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON! COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *dies*
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yooomygod, that is good. i love this fic. please write soon! i cant wait to see what sorts of trouble they get into at the amusement park!! *wishes for next chapter*
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Reviewed By: Harmony of Saulsburg On: July 14, 2005 23:56 CDT
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.............. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~! I love must! Have! more?!?! Pwease? : puppy dog eyes :
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Reviewed By: JODIBETZ On: June 09, 2005 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems too short for such a loooong wait. I recommend that you make your chapter longer.
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 11:11 CDT
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hey this is a really great story! I love it so far. can't wait until you update. ~*Inuluvher151*~
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Reviewed By: KitsuneFox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 22:52 CDT
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I didn't even realize that you'd updated! This fic has done really good so far! I'm very proud to say that I've been there since the beginning! ^.^ Luv from the Kitsune
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Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*drool* Need more please update cannot end this way. Need more! *drool*
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, can't wait to read more. Better update soon otherwise it will end up being moths late like your other chapter. Whee!
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, can't wait to read more. Better update soon otherwise it will end up being moths late like your other chapter. Whee!
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Reviewed By: Zarah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story its great! please update soon!
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Title: baka inu
Reviewed By: yumemiru/AMANDA On: February 28, 2005 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Kagome kicks his ass when she finds out what Inuyasha is ploting (evil laughs)
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Reviewed By: mentally insane On: February 28, 2005 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me want know what happen *points sword at u* update or I kill!!!*dragged off in straitjacket*
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