| "The Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kikyohater#1 On: November 29, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm.... this could be a really great story. I know I loved the first chapter. Very original. Normally everyone says Kagome is the rich girl but here you turn the tables and make her poor. Claps for the author! Great chapter and I hope that you update really soon!!!!
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Title: Really great
Reviewed By: arch_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur off to a really great start and I can't wait to read ur next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MsMayhem On: November 29, 2004 13:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is such a *?$& . I sincerely hope you plan to teach him a good lesson in this fic. Please don't let Kagome become a doormat! Let her show up the entire school. By all means let them be together, but he's going to have to show that he deserves it in the end!! I'm not trying to tell you how to write your fic, but I'm just throwing out my hopes for it! Please continue! I am intrigued!
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Title: Heylo^^
Reviewed By: AbuniKage On: November 29, 2004 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEYLO!!Pwease write da next chappie soon!!Dis story be da SHITNIZ!!O_O;;....^^;;;;
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Reviewed By: mkk78 On: November 28, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Start! Looking forward to more!
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