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| "Destiny of Loneliness" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: dragonchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i finaly found the perfect sad fanfic. realy well written i like the end its veryy depressing and i want to laugh i have no idea why! i still wonder what hapened to kurama though.
| Reviewed By: dragonchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 22:00 CDT
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wow ive finaly found the perfect depressing fanfic now im happy. and depressed wow crazy. very well writter its sooooooooooo depressing and for some strange reason i want to laugh!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 01:02 CDT
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I enjoy, no, I love your writing style, but as the story got longer, I couldn't help but notice a few mistakes here and there, with both spelling and grammar. Other than that, this fic is beautiful... sad, like a snow flake I guess. Intricately designed, cold to the touch, delicate... at least, to me, snow flake's are sad. Ah well, don't mind me, I'm glad I read this, it was beautiful. ^-^
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, sad, and all too real. Thank you for completing this gem. I hope you return with another story soon.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, a beautiful chapter! The emotions, psychology, and Hiei ring absolutely true. At last Hiei begins to face reality, but like Shiori, I'll continue to hope that Kurama is found.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another terrific chapter! Poor Hiei, so much in denial and poor everyone around him in his anger. Mukuro, Yukina, Yusuke and Kuwabara were well displayed. I loved Yukina and Mukuro's compassion, and the way Yusuke and Kuwabara were so determinedly searching for Kurama, even calling in for assistance by Mukuro and Yomi. The rumors that quickly spread about the reason for Hiei's anger was so very accurate a depiction of how rumors often do start -- with little validity in fact. Please come back soon with more; I'm still hoping that Kurama will eventually be found, and be OK.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Powerful battle scene, and the race after Kurama while monitoring his fading ki was heartstopping. I can't wait to find out what happened to Kurama, and Hiei's reaction (please, please, let Kurama be found OK).
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific beginning. Poor confused Hiei, with just the right amount of openings toward a new beginning with foreboding indicators all around. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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