Title: ... Wow ...
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Wow. I really just don't know if words can describe how poignant and beautiful this was. I think that you captured the bittersweet feelings of this relationship, and that is what makes me saddest. Things happen, I know, and yet to be able to lay down the crux of something in such a beautiful way, not only through spoken words but through what is going on inside their heads is something really remarkable. I'm a firm believer that the truest form of writing is done from the heart, and that you've obviously done this . . . Its lovely and sad and beautiful all at the same time. I'm not going to pick it apart and tell you that this is grammatically blah blah or what have you. This is something that I can tell came from your heart, and as such, it should be left alone. I'm impressed, I'm humbled, I'm grateful to you for sharing such a lovely 'story'. God bless! ~Sueric~
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