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Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemon neds to be a weee bit biger and wares round 2?
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Reviewed By: smileyjones [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are a talented writer, but I think you can make your lemons a lot better by adding a little bit more describtion. I think the best way to do this is to imagine the senses, such as the feel, smell, taste, and sounds that the characters are experiencing. I don't mean this as a dis I am just trying to help you write to your full potential. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 04:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
XD 2 words, "Smutty Goodness!"
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Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! I really could see these 2 together and u did it nicely. Please continue to write more like this.
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