| "Lonely No More" Reviews/Comments [ 174 ] |
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Reviewed By: daniy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 10:31 CST
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NickelBackedHanyou: do you have an ego problem? was there really a need for that? or do you enjoy making people feel smaller then you because you know yourself to be bad writer? Cindy is my best friend, and she is a great writer and there was absolty no need for that. its called amatcre wriing for a reason. most of us just write to relax...others have a goal in mind. like your goal seems to be be a dickhead. -jinx cindy your story is great.. don't let one bad apple ruin it for the rest of us love ya :D
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Reviewed By: omg On: December 08, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't listen to that idiot. NickelBackedHanyou obviously has something up his/her butt! they must not no a good story when they see one! awsome story keep writing and ignore that person, he is very ignorant and his opinion makes every loyal reader mad! keep up the good work, can't wait until i get to read more of ur story!
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Reviewed By: marta 178 On: December 07, 2004 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't belive that someone doen't like your story and posts a review saying that like they're pro writers or something!! And the worst is that they don't like the comments on the middle of the story!! They give the story more live and a fun moment! oh wait and she says that it doesn't have a plot! If didn't have a plot it would be like this --meet--have sex--bye-- and you would give yourself the trouble to develop the caracters more...if it didn't have a plot you wouldn't speak about jinx mother and kagome's father... She didn't even have the corage to register or sign up or something! so she is NO important thing... You shouldn't mind with this kind of people write...probably she only read the last chap published till date and had a lot of time to waist and nothing to do...DON'T even consider stoping to write this fic!! I like it a lot! It's who like it that maters! If they don't like it they shouldn't read it! Nobody makes them! ^__________^ Update soon your ever fan Marta *peace*
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Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care what NickelBackedHanyou sais, I think that your story is a really good one. I love reading it. I hope you update soon. It's like you said, If they don't like it then they don't have to read it. Rock on Jinx!
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Reviewed By: ooo awwwww On: December 07, 2004 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good it's crazy. i'm now obsessed with it! I love your mike, cindy and jinx things especially when they're in the middle of the story. They're so funny! keep up the good work. Oh BTW i hope mike and jinx got their internet back i would die if this story didnt continue! GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: EcchoKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 01:05 CST
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this is a really good fic i have read some other indian inuyasha stories and the author doing them just quit on them. it is nice to see one that has gone pass chapter five and is still going. Keep up the good work no matter what anyone says. please update soon i love this story.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:32 CST
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'Can't wait to read more! Update soon, please! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Bankotsu On: December 06, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad.Not bad at all.Originality is your strong point.Your style of writing also does you credit.But...would you mind putting all the jinx-mike-cindy things at the beginning and the end of the story instead?They are distracting when sandwiched in the middle of the main plot.Carry on posting more chapters please.
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Reviewed By: Jewel Peri On: December 06, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe, it's like reading two stories at once!!!! aww drat... look you made me miss class! o well, it was a boring pointless class anyways. update soon, with the adventures of inuyasha and mike cindy and jinx! hehe
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY!! awww...that was so sweet!! jinx has finally found a mate. i feel sorry for you mike...but i gotta say it was pretty funny *giggles*. anyway great chapter i cant wait to read the next one!! ViciousVamp
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Title: Um... CORNY
Reviewed By: NickelBackedHanyou On: December 05, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it... well it wasn't written all that well. And it was corny. the way you had them speak was not natural. And i didn't believe what they were saying. There was lust, there was attraction, but nothing more. And why didn't Kagome try and use her powers more. You had them mentioned, but who in their right mind would not be training with their powers. And if she had these powers, why wouldn't she use them to try and heal people or at least to learn to protect herself. It was corny. I liked Jinx but not the Author Notes Jinx. That could and should be left out. It had no plot. Its annoying, you take people out of the half written crap you produced. Believe me honey, you need all the help you can get. REWRITE
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 18:58 CST
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Please update soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: not as crazy On: December 05, 2004 15:19 CST
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Part Indian, part human? I don't get it. Indians are human.
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA!!! so soory for not reviewing!! got a lot of things going on!! Gomen!! but thanks for the email!! i like the plot of your story. damn wolves had to go and hurt kagome. i hope to read the next chapter soon!! keep up the great work!! ViciousVamp
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Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: December 04, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved your stories in the past and this one is another one to add to the list. Not to mention the three of you and you little comments between paragraphs. It reminds me of something of a cross of Mystery Theater 300 with some Will & Grace humor thrown in. I wonder what would happen if you threw Jinx a slinky... hours of mindless fun for Jinx. And entertainment value for everyone else by watching what happens. Yeah, ok, so maybe I am a bit weird. But hey, tis all in good fun. *snickers* Besides, it's all fun and games till someone gets hurt... then it's down right funny. >:D Well, I do believe I have taken up enough of your time. I look forward to your next update. TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
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