| "Lonely No More" Reviews/Comments [ 174 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bankotsu On: December 04, 2004 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not exactly very spectacular,but enjoyable.You write well,your content is substantial,but predictable. It didn't rate your spelling and grammar because you were edited. If you want to read a 9.5/10 pointer fanfic,go and search for "Of Gods and Monsters". Oh by the way,if you need an editor,just contact me at the_rock_rjc@yahoo.com.sg
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Title: Lady Banshee 999
Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: December 03, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved your stories in the past and this one is another one to add to the list. Not to mention the three of you and you little comments between paragraphs. It reminds me of something of a cross of Mystery Theater 300 with some Will & Grace humor thrown in. I wonder what would happen if you threw Jinx a slinky... hours of mindless fun for Jinx. And entertainment value for everyone else by watching what happens. Yeah, ok, so maybe I am a bit weird. But hey, tis all in good fun. *snickers* Besides, it's all fun and games till someone gets hurt... then it's down right funny. >:D Well, I do believe I have taken up enough of your time. I look forward to your next update. TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Skittlez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 04:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this story is so so so so soooooooo good! your a really good writer ive never read a fanfic like this b4 usually i read some fanfics and its like there all the same but this one is totally different and thats why i like it so much! oh and i think the lil things of cindy, mike, and jinx is funny lol! hope ya update ASAP! if i cud give it 1000000000/10 i wud but sadly i cant so i give it 10/10! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Indago Light On: December 02, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your righting style is good but still abit rough in places. But the thing I like most about this fic is the fact that I don't want to stop reading. You stop in appropriat places, pausing when the moment still leaves the reader wanting more. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings, how often do you update?
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Reviewed By: marta178 ( not signed in as usual) On: December 02, 2004 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story! Hope you update soon!! *peace*
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (still too lazy to login) On: December 02, 2004 06:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I'll make the introductions! Well, Inuyasha meet Kagome, Kagome (when you'll wake up) meet Inuyasha. Now, fall in love and have sex ^^ Ok, I'll stop... keep writing! ^_~
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 03:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh! Who killed Kagome's mother? If it was Inuyasha's men, how can she forgive him? Please update soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: bnhj On: December 01, 2004 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like it. updadte soon.
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (Ok, still too lazy, so still no logged in) On: December 01, 2004 15:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter: it was nice to see Kagome as a half-half... I can't wait till they met! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: D_a_R_k_A_n_G_e_L_69 On: November 30, 2004 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! THAT is really good!! i hope to see more soon!! ^_^ i totally love your stories!!! ^_^ (it's DarkAngel69 i'm just to tired to sign in ^_^)
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 10:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story so far! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 06:31 CST
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Great start! You're doing awesome so far, I'll be looking out for the next chapter. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (I'm lazy, so I'm still not logged in) On: November 30, 2004 06:26 CST
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Ya know, I really like this story! It's quite original and you've got a good writing style ^^ I'm a HUGE Inu/Kag fan, so I hope the female's Kagome ^_~ Can't wait to read next chapter!
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Reviewed By: carelove:D On: November 30, 2004 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love how this story is starting and the plot is great please update soon i can't wait.
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