| "Lonely No More" Reviews/Comments [ 174 ] |
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:32 CST
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'Can't wait to read more! Update soon, please! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Bankotsu On: December 06, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad.Not bad at all.Originality is your strong point.Your style of writing also does you credit.But...would you mind putting all the jinx-mike-cindy things at the beginning and the end of the story instead?They are distracting when sandwiched in the middle of the main plot.Carry on posting more chapters please.
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Reviewed By: Jewel Peri On: December 06, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe, it's like reading two stories at once!!!! aww drat... look you made me miss class! o well, it was a boring pointless class anyways. update soon, with the adventures of inuyasha and mike cindy and jinx! hehe
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY!! awww...that was so sweet!! jinx has finally found a mate. i feel sorry for you mike...but i gotta say it was pretty funny *giggles*. anyway great chapter i cant wait to read the next one!! ViciousVamp
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Title: Um... CORNY
Reviewed By: NickelBackedHanyou On: December 05, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it... well it wasn't written all that well. And it was corny. the way you had them speak was not natural. And i didn't believe what they were saying. There was lust, there was attraction, but nothing more. And why didn't Kagome try and use her powers more. You had them mentioned, but who in their right mind would not be training with their powers. And if she had these powers, why wouldn't she use them to try and heal people or at least to learn to protect herself. It was corny. I liked Jinx but not the Author Notes Jinx. That could and should be left out. It had no plot. Its annoying, you take people out of the half written crap you produced. Believe me honey, you need all the help you can get. REWRITE
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: not as crazy On: December 05, 2004 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Part Indian, part human? I don't get it. Indians are human.
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIYA!!! so soory for not reviewing!! got a lot of things going on!! Gomen!! but thanks for the email!! i like the plot of your story. damn wolves had to go and hurt kagome. i hope to read the next chapter soon!! keep up the great work!! ViciousVamp
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Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: December 04, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved your stories in the past and this one is another one to add to the list. Not to mention the three of you and you little comments between paragraphs. It reminds me of something of a cross of Mystery Theater 300 with some Will & Grace humor thrown in. I wonder what would happen if you threw Jinx a slinky... hours of mindless fun for Jinx. And entertainment value for everyone else by watching what happens. Yeah, ok, so maybe I am a bit weird. But hey, tis all in good fun. *snickers* Besides, it's all fun and games till someone gets hurt... then it's down right funny. >:D Well, I do believe I have taken up enough of your time. I look forward to your next update. TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
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Reviewed By: Bankotsu On: December 04, 2004 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not exactly very spectacular,but enjoyable.You write well,your content is substantial,but predictable. It didn't rate your spelling and grammar because you were edited. If you want to read a 9.5/10 pointer fanfic,go and search for "Of Gods and Monsters". Oh by the way,if you need an editor,just contact me at the_rock_rjc@yahoo.com.sg
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Title: Lady Banshee 999
Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: December 03, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved your stories in the past and this one is another one to add to the list. Not to mention the three of you and you little comments between paragraphs. It reminds me of something of a cross of Mystery Theater 300 with some Will & Grace humor thrown in. I wonder what would happen if you threw Jinx a slinky... hours of mindless fun for Jinx. And entertainment value for everyone else by watching what happens. Yeah, ok, so maybe I am a bit weird. But hey, tis all in good fun. *snickers* Besides, it's all fun and games till someone gets hurt... then it's down right funny. >:D Well, I do believe I have taken up enough of your time. I look forward to your next update. TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Skittlez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 04:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this story is so so so so soooooooo good! your a really good writer ive never read a fanfic like this b4 usually i read some fanfics and its like there all the same but this one is totally different and thats why i like it so much! oh and i think the lil things of cindy, mike, and jinx is funny lol! hope ya update ASAP! if i cud give it 1000000000/10 i wud but sadly i cant so i give it 10/10! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Indago Light On: December 02, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your righting style is good but still abit rough in places. But the thing I like most about this fic is the fact that I don't want to stop reading. You stop in appropriat places, pausing when the moment still leaves the reader wanting more. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings, how often do you update?
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Reviewed By: marta178 ( not signed in as usual) On: December 02, 2004 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story! Hope you update soon!! *peace*
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