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"Light of The Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: reviewing myself
Reviewed By: Kari moon [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2007 08:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing/critiquing myself. I think my style's not all that great but I'm improving. My spelling shouldn't be much off since I use a dictionary while I'm writing but some words slip through the cracks. My grammar, not so sure. I suck in english/comp. but I know how to make sentences make sense so it shouldn't be too bad. I think I have based a lot of things off the manga/anime versions of these shows, but at the same time I create a whole different picture of them & their characters. I really enjoy reading/writing this fanfic & I hope you do as well!
 Reviewed By: Masteroi  On: December 03, 2004 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Just a suggestion. If you would start on a new line when a charactor speaks it would help readers out. Huge blocks of text can be discouraging.

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