| "Dream Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I could so see that happing! I love the ending i laughf to hard I was crying!
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Title: *laughs hysterically*
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending was perfect! I love little twists like that. Mustange must have enjoyed the show. *evil grin*
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Title: good
Reviewed By: no name ever On: May 18, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it was good but you could actually describe it more and make a sequall(sp) where it actually does happen. u could make a malor story out o this...maybe u could hav ed rape her!!!im a hentai...i kno!!!:) someone...i dnt kno who i am.....
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Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: jester123500 On: March 22, 2005 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what can i say exept...plz make a sequal(did i speel that right?)anyway if you do email me at jester123500@yahoo.com ^.^
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Reviewed By: The Dusty Moth On: February 03, 2005 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was cute, but severely lacking detail. Any good story, especially a smut one, deserves lucious details for all of your horny audience members. It has a lot of potential though. :) Signed, The Dusty Moth of ZZW Inkk.
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Reviewed By: Hellokitty_4_ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...Really matches the title...dream boy...If you ever update email me ok? Thankz
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Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was cute. I did like it, but you were a little too up front with everything. In writing you shouldn't be afraid to acutally describe things. You could back a little farther up and explain how the two ended up together in the dream perhaps. And you could describe Winry as she removed her clothes for the males in the audience. And for those of us who stalk Edward, you could feel free to describe him sitting in the chair, gazing upon her body and feeling himself become quickly aroused...**shivers** x,x don't get me wrong! It was an adorable story..in fact it kinda enspired me. ^^ Too cute though! love it lots!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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