| "Changing worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello. Do you remember me? I'm Yamifanner! Your the one who reviewed "The Hikaris Takes Their Yamis to School" and I want to say is thanks for reviewing that story. This story rocks and hope you continue this fic. Ja ne.
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Title: Dokie okie
Reviewed By: Ikoji_Itemu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh...I know you!^^(Don't call me by me I'm not me...not ok!)You need to um...fix paragraphs its jumbled.... I'm Koji, right now. So whatever you'll figure it out at school ok?
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Reviewed By: justicegirl101 On: December 07, 2004 19:09 CST
Comment/Review:
that seems good keep going
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